They gave me an idea of how I can edit my one when I come to editing it. I was supposed to be showing it today but due to technical difficulties I couldn't. This could be a good thing because I have now picked up on comments so I will be able to edit mine better.
Hi Nathan, good to see the photo of your notes - good first hand research/ evaluations. Just reread your comment in yellow as you are repetitive so you will need to rewrite your analysis to improve please.
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